soul collector

The concept is very cool, I always love what your brain generates
You need to notice some things though -
Lantern is a little too flat, it might be a paper cut model.
I have a feeling that the whole composition is leading me out of the picture to the right, this includes the sloping horizontal line.
Also, I'd put the weight of the staff on the other shoulder or hold it with the other hand.
Last thing, not sure if this is intentional, but even though this person is walking on those stilts and supposed to be taller than the house on the left I get the weird sensation that this person is actually standing next to this house and it's a miniaturized house of sorts.

I think that's all. I really love the outfit you created, it looks very original. I could've suggested to keep "pushing" but I think I wanted to be a little more specific and help you out.
Hope my comment is any help at all.
Cheerios!